The Ones Who Hold Her
"She struts around so full of herself--like every word, stroke is heaven sent. She thinks she's such a talented artist. Well, she 's just a brush.
They turn her upside down; grab her by her legs; dunk her hair in paint; and whip her hair back and forth against a blank canvas. She just a brush.
If you ask me, the ones who deserve the credit are the ones who hold her."
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9 comments:
Interesting excerpt! I'm curious to read more.
Unusual. It has tweaked my curiosity
eek, she's just a brush... or a puppet? I like this six, and I'm very curious to see where this is going!
Intriguing - and I hope you'll tell us the context in next week's post.
Thank you all for your comments. To answer your questions, this is a stand alone flash fiction piece. Now, based, on your comments, I clearly see its limitations.
I love the last line
Thank you, Lindsay
Leanne - These 6 sentences pulled me in hook, line, and sinker. I want MORE!
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